Beginning drafts/ideas for this little song I mentioned in the last post:
Teenage dreams of hearts and rainbows
and having that magical first kiss
uncomfortable, so awkward, awkward
never imagined a life like this.
Look out girls,
the wolves are coming,
hide your hearts
they're hungry and cunning.
I then talked myself out of this rhyme scheme and tried it another way:
Teenage dreams of rainbows and hearts
touching was such and uncomfortable part.
Imagining the magical first kiss,
never dreamed of a life like this.
The wolves are coming
Got to keep running
Hide the jewels
they want from you.
So, I'm not sold on either version...but, still working with this. I came up with one other section (bridge, perhaps):
You left your heart in his hands
said, "take this for me,
and keep it safe.
I don't need it where I'm going."
Run, boy,
the wolves are coming.
Don't let them find you.
Yeah, back to the notebook. Needs work. :)

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