I went back to yesterday's poem and a few lines came to me. It still feels unfinished. I think the stanzas are out of order, but I haven't quite figured out how to piece everything together.
Here's the next draft:
I dream of you
reaching out across
a landscape of pictures
of words
never uttered.
Destiny.
Secret.
Blood pearls
cascading.
I can feel myself
falling under the weight
of longing.
reaching out across
a landscape of pictures
of words
never uttered.
Destiny.
Secret.
Blood pearls
cascading.
I can feel myself
falling under the weight
of longing.

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